Question

假如你叫王芳，最近在網(wǎng)上交了一位來(lái)自英國(guó)的筆友Mary，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給Mary寫一封不少于100詞的e-mail，介紹自己的情況。

要點(diǎn)：

1.王芳，15歲，雙子座(Gemini)，家住姜堰；

2.喜歡讀書、旅游和交朋友；

3.最喜愛(ài)的顏色是紅色，因?yàn)榧t色是一種強(qiáng)色，象征力量和強(qiáng)烈的情感;

4.對(duì)英語(yǔ)很感興趣，會(huì)唱很多英文歌曲；

5.班里的一些同學(xué)也很想找外國(guó)筆友，希望得到幫助；

6.有機(jī)會(huì)希望去英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)。

Dear Mary,

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Yours

Wang Fang

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mary,

I am Wang Fang, a middle school student in Jiangyan, and I am 15 years old now. I am Gemini, so I am curious about everything. I like reading, traveling and making friends. I enjoy a lot communicating with others.

My favourite colour is red because red is a kind of strong colour. It represents power and strong feelings.

I’m interested in English, too. I can sing lots of English songs. And I think writing to you in English will help me a lot in learning English. By the way, my classmates want to make pen-friends with foreigners, too. I hope you can help them.

I hope I can study in Britain later. If I have a chance to your country, I hope to meet you.

Hope to hear from you soon.

Yours,

Wang Fang

【解析】

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封電子郵件。給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。

考點(diǎn)：關(guān)于應(yīng)用文的寫作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。