Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（15分）
社會(huì)的發(fā)展帶來(lái)了一系列的環(huán)境問(wèn)題，如：水污染，動(dòng)物滅絕等。如何使我們的世界變得更加美好，是我們要思考的一個(gè)問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所學(xué)內(nèi)容，以“Let’s Make Our World More Beautiful”為題，寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。
                          
Our environment is getting worse and worse,                                                                                       
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     

Answer 1

Let’s Make Our World More Beautiful  
Our environment is getting worse and worse,    such as the water is getting dirtier and dirtier and many animals are in danger. What should we do to protect our environment?                                                                                  
First, I think we should save every drop of water. Second, we should protect animals. Animals are our friends and they can give us joy. We should share the world with them. Third, we’d better plant more trees. If everyone try their best to protect our environment, our would will become more and more beautiful.  

解析試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，寫(xiě)一篇如何讓世界變得更美好的短文。由于在要點(diǎn)中只給出了寫(xiě)作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定時(shí)態(tài)主要詞匯等問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。另外，在描述時(shí)，應(yīng)該注意人稱的變化。
考點(diǎn)：命題作文的寫(xiě)作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。