Question

在眾多的電視節(jié)目中， 你最喜歡哪一種？請談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)， 以 “My favorite TV program”為題， 寫一篇短文。
My favorite TV program
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Answer 1

My favorite TV program
There are all kinds of progrms on TV, such as talk shows, cartoons, game shows and so on. But my favorite program is talk show. Som people don’t like it ,they think it is meaning less and boring. But I don’t think so. For me,I think these talk shows can make me laugh and they are also educational. Every night, I usually watch it for fun. And we have a discussion about talking show. Eighty percent of my classmates like watching talk shows. At last,if you feel tired or sad,you can watch talk shows. They can make you feel relaxing.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。同時針對個人的真實(shí)情況與短文的要求進(jìn)行恰當(dāng)?shù)氖潞�，更能加�?qiáng)作品的可讀性。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文在介紹了許多節(jié)目之后，對節(jié)目中選取了一個自己喜歡的，并且對其進(jìn)行說明喜歡的原因，在描寫中運(yùn)用了恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~進(jìn)行說明，比如：make me laugh使我歡笑，have a discussion有一個決定，Eighty percent百分之八十，At last在最后。同時用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚，沒有或基本沒有語言錯誤；書寫工整；字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。