Question

目前，有些家長(zhǎng)為了能讓孩子早日成才，不顧孩子的喜好，往往把自己的興趣強(qiáng)加給孩子，強(qiáng)迫孩子去學(xué)這個(gè)、學(xué)那個(gè)，結(jié)果事與愿違。結(jié)合你身邊的事例，以“Dream and Reality”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)培養(yǎng)孩子成才的看法。

注意：

1．標(biāo)題及開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2．文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；

3．詞數(shù)要求120左右。

Dream and Reality

Nowadays, there is an increasing tendency for parents to design the future for their children…….

                                                                         

                                                                         

                                                                         

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dream and Reality

Nowadays, there is an increasing tendency for parents to design the future for their children. Regardless of the children’s interest, some parents want them to attend all kinds of other classes, laying a heavy burden on their shoulders. As a result, the children almost have no time to play.

A typical case is my neighbor Mr. and Mrs. Wang. They want their child to be an artist. They choose a music class on Saturday and a painting on Sunday for the child. In fact, the child has no interest at all. The child is kept busy all day. After a few years their efforts are in vain.

I think parents should let their children develop their talent by their own choice and interests and give them enough time and space to learn what they want to. Children should be encouraged to get close to nature. We should help children turn their dream of enjoying the beauty of nature into reality. Only in this way can children have a happy and enjoyable life.

【解析】這是一篇現(xiàn)象評(píng)論類(lèi)文章，內(nèi)容貼近生活，具有時(shí)代性，可寫(xiě)性和思想性，要求學(xué)生就所給現(xiàn)象，進(jìn)行描述，分析這個(gè)種現(xiàn)象的原因，并表達(dá)個(gè)人的看法，考生要根據(jù)自己的生活和學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，同時(shí)使用高級(jí)詞匯和句型，增加文章句型的多樣化，恰當(dāng)使用連接詞，增加文章的連貫性。