Question

假定你是李華。請你給美國的朋友Tom寫封信，告訴他你將去他所在的城市度假，帶去他想要的那幅中國絲綢，同時詢問他是否可以接機(jī)。信中還需要說明：

航班號：CA991

到達(dá)：8月16日上午11:30

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。

Dear Tom,

  How are you doing?

                                                                               

                                                                                

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                                

                                                                               

                                                                               

Looking forward to your reply.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Peter，

How are you going ?

I’m writing to tell you that I’m going to your city for a holiday, and I have brought you the Chinese sick you have asked for before.

Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet me at the airport and take me to my hotel since this is the first time that I have visited America .

My flight number is CA991 and it will arrive at 11:30 am,August16, thank you in advance.

【解析】

試題解析：從文章體裁分析，本文是一篇記敘文的寫作，寫的是作者要去朋友的城市度假，因為第一次去所以需要朋友接機(jī)。

寫信是中學(xué)生最熟悉的事，這種形式的寫作貼近學(xué)生生活，使他們有話可說。寫作時應(yīng)注意下面幾點：

(1)注意人稱，應(yīng)該用第一人稱的形式給筆友Tom寫信。

(2)注意時態(tài)的正確使用：用一般將來時和一般現(xiàn)在時。

(3)要點全面、層次清楚、語言簡練。

(4)注意恰當(dāng)使用連接詞，使各個要點間邏輯連貫、行文通順。

(5)適當(dāng)使用一些高級句型和詞匯以提高作文檔次。

【亮點說明】

文章使用了非常好的短語和句子給文章增色，如The Would you please meet me at the airport（would you please +do sth ?請你….好嗎?）, this is the first time that I have visited America .(this is the first time +主語 +have done，這是。。。第一次做某事) I have brought you the Chinese sick you have asked for before.（定語從句），in advance 提前，并且主語了句子的銜接如： also 等。

考點：提綱作文寫作。